1.       Introduction= TAG (Title, Author, Genre)

A.      Topic Sentence= What we are going to focus on= Am going to focus on hatchet similarities and differences lastly the conclusion as well for cast away.                                                                                                        

B.      Hatchet

Hatchet, a novel written by Gary Paulsen, is about a thirteen-year-old boy . Brian who is lost in a  Canadian forest.

C.       Cast Away

Cast Away is a movie  a man named Chuck who is lost  on a island.

D.      Thesis

a.       Both Brian and Chuck had been trough a lot of stuff when they weren't stranded island or forest but it gets worst.

2.       Similarities= Two things that are the same that Chuck and Brian do

A.      Topic Sentence= What we are going to focus on= Brian and chuck similarities.

B.      Hatchet similarity= Hatchet and cast away are both about survival. A lot of brain tools chuck use them as well there a lot of similarities.

a.       Quote='' its the tail of  the plane" he said aloud, half  expecting to hear somebody's voice.(Paulsen 149) 

b.       Explanation= brain said '' its the tail of the plane'' because he was expecting to hear somebody's voice.

C.      Cast Away similarity= chuck use a spear just like brain but in a different shape. Both brain and chuck are still fighting to not die for there love ones.

a.       Paraphrase= when chuck open FedEx  box every other day.(cast away)

b.       Explanation = chuck would open the box every other day because it meant special for him.

D.      Conclusion= I but some similarities of brain and chuck.

3.       Differences= Two things that are different that Chuck and Brian do

A.      Topic Sentence= what we are going to focus on. A. brain and chuck crash in different places.

B.      Hatchet similarity= brain is younger than chuck. brain had more useful tools than chuck.

a. Quote= " inside there was a hatchet the kind with a steel handle and a rubber hand handgrip"(Paulsen 8)

b. Explanation= I choose this quote because brain started with a tool not like chuck.

C.      Cast Away similarity = They both got really hurt bad. They both ate sea food and got sick of it.  

                                                             a.      Paraphrase=when chuck was making his boat.(cast away)

                                                             b.      Explanation= I choose the paraphrase because he used a lot of different item's to make the boat.(cast away)

D.      Conclusion= I choose a lot of  similarity differences of cast away and hatchet.

4.       Conclusion= Final thoughts

A. I think the movie cast away was great but I liked hatchet better both movie and movie were great those my thoughts of cast away and hatchet.  

       1) Brain is getting confused and bringing brain down because of the secret. That's why sometimes he over thinks the secret and the divorce. The secret makes him weak when he is trying to survive. He thinks in his head that he made the divorce happen. That's what makes brain and harder for him to fight and survive.    


      2) How the past mix with my present.  I don't feel different. I feel the same noting  bad had happen so far know past had mix with my present. know member had went to my present .I still feel the same away .

2/21/17

 Dear, Brain 

      

I feel bad about the divorce you wouldn't  be lost in a forest if I didn't divorce your mother. I feel mad and sad that your lost in the forest because I divorce your mother. Am sad because I cant find you I hope I find you soon. I am worried  that I  wont see you again and I thought everyday if he survived the plane crash. I would sent every guy to find you know matter what. I hope I  find soon so you can tell me how you survived. I am sorry for the divorce you wouldn't be lost in a forest.

    Sincerely, your Father              

    

    

-the divorce was why I moved.

-I feel worried right now because brain is not here yet why isn't he here.

- I would like to say to brain is that good things happen when you work hard.




Dear brain I wish you would come home. I don't now why you isn't here but I hope you come back so that I can spend time with you. I guessing the reason why you ant here is because of your mother. I dearly feel bad for you. You should come home right now so that you don't have to deal with your mom. Please brain please come home your literally scaring me right now what happens if your mom thinks I lost you or something. I just hope that you will come home for the hundred time because I don't wanna here your mom complain that I supposable lost you.

Love dad

tuesday 2/6/17

       what methods do you use to mange your time and survive the week? I just keep calm and  just let the day past. That's how I survive the week.


      Do you enjoy high school? why or why not. For me high school is ok but what I don't like about high school there is know class for me here. What I wanted to learn how to fix cars and know how it works.


      Do you think you will miss it when its over? I don't really think I would miss because after high school I would go to college after  that. I think would miss some things form high school in the future but right know don't think so.

monday, january 30, 2017

     Have you ever had defining moment in your life (a moment that changed who you are)? was it good ? bad? what did you learn form it? The moment in my life that changed me was when I moved school it was bad and good. The bad part was that I didn't know any one in the school. The good thing was that I meet new friends in the school. What changed me was that am not that shy to move to a different school no more. I didn't really have a defining moment in my life  but that was one.          


      What do you think are the most important things to know about surviving the big moments in life? I think the most important thing in life to survive is now how to survive with out the things you use daily. You  have to  be in a good health rate no heart problem be healthy. then you need to be hard working in life.
          

I wouldn't thing I would survive a year in the wilderness . I think I would survive a month with out any survive skills. Am not the type of people that is mostly out side am the type person that is in doors. So I think I would survive  only one month. I wouldn't survive that long in the  wilderness.