Tuesday, March 21, 2017

1.       Introduction= TAG (Title, Author, Genre)

A.      Topic Sentence= What we are going to focus on= Am going to focus on hatchet similarities and differences lastly the conclusion as well for cast away.                                                                                                        
B.      Hatchet
Hatchet, a novel written by Gary Paulsen, is about a thirteen-year-old boy . Brian who is lost in a  Canadian forest.
C.       Cast Away
Cast Away is a movie  a man named Chuck who is lost  on a island.
D.      Thesis

a.       Both Brian and Chuck had been trough a lot of stuff when they weren't stranded island or forest but it gets worst.

2.       Similarities= Two things that are the same that Chuck and Brian do
A.      Topic Sentence= What we are going to focus on= Brian and chuck similarities.
B.      Hatchet similarity= Hatchet and cast away are both about survival. A lot of brain tools chuck use them as well there a lot of similarities.
a.       Quote='' its the tail of  the plane" he said aloud, half  expecting to hear somebody's voice.(Paulsen 149) 
b.       Explanation= brain said '' its the tail of the plane'' because he was expecting to hear somebody's voice.
C.      Cast Away similarity= chuck use a spear just like brain but in a different shape. Both brain and chuck are still fighting to not die for there love ones.
a.       Paraphrase= when chuck open FedEx  box every other day.(cast away)
b.       Explanation = chuck would open the box every other day because it meant special for him.
D.      Conclusion= I but some similarities of brain and chuck.

3.       Differences= Two things that are different that Chuck and Brian do
A.      Topic Sentence= what we are going to focus on. A. brain and chuck crash in different places.
B.      Hatchet similarity= brain is younger than chuck. brain had more useful tools than chuck.
a. Quote= " inside there was a hatchet the kind with a steel handle and a rubber hand handgrip"(Paulsen 8)
b. Explanation= I choose this quote because brain started with a tool not like chuck.
C.      Cast Away similarity = They both got really hurt bad. They both ate sea food and got sick of it.  
                                                             a.      Paraphrase=when chuck was making his boat.(cast away)
                                                             b.      Explanation= I choose the paraphrase because he used a lot of different item's to make the boat.(cast away)
D.      Conclusion= I choose a lot of  similarity differences of cast away and hatchet.
4.       Conclusion= Final thoughts
A. I think the movie cast away was great but I liked hatchet better both movie and movie were great those my thoughts of cast away and hatchet.  

Friday, March 3, 2017

       1) Brain is getting confused and bringing brain down because of the secret. That's why sometimes he over thinks the secret and the divorce. The secret makes him weak when he is trying to survive. He thinks in his head that he made the divorce happen. That's what makes brain and harder for him to fight and survive.    


      2) How the past mix with my present.  I don't feel different. I feel the same noting  bad had happen so far know past had mix with my present. know member had went to my present .I still feel the same away .